"Wow. I suspect that the pacing is something you don't like about this chapter, something that adds to its forcedness, but to me, it perfectly underscores the building tension and the coming conversation (conflict?) between Mike and Harvey about the things Harvey knows."

I hope that "wow" in the beginning is a good thing. Hehe. Glad that the pace isn't upsetting you. To me, it feels like I'm pushing things a little in an effort to finish up the fic but I'm glad it makes sense to you. :)

Thank you for reading!