http://emmajane14.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] emmajane14.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] emmajane14 2012-01-27 02:19 pm (UTC)

I'm happy with the Harvey knowing things about Mike parts, but the chapter over all (in my head at least) seems to not be very fluid and it just feels a little forced. Also, Harvey's character has been bordering OOC through the whole fic just because of the AU aspect, but here he feels off.

IDK *flails*
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